My Self Reflection

I've learned about how to write an argumentative essay. I understand how to write them. I know the format for writing an essay. But I have a problem in grammar. And I don't know what title that might be interesting for my argumentative essay. Because, Ms. H said that my title for my argumentative essay was little boring. I wrote the second paragraph right. But the Third is the same as the second paragraph. And I have bad conclusion there. It seems writing an essay were so easy, but actually not. Its quite hard for me. Because there must some format for a perfect score. Not only that, also how we write the essay. We need to have a good thesis statement, our good grammar and etc.

We also had a debate. Actually, debate is not hard. We all need is research and speak. But somehow, I disappointed with my objection sentences last week. I wrote it on my paper, but I didn't saw them. I wrote it quite long. And because of that, I didn't speak clearly. It also because I'm to nervous, maybe. For me, that score was good, but its not enough.

I think I should practice to make an essay next time. And oractice at home before th debate time. I hope, I can be better in the next unit and get a perfect score. Actually, I just updated my argumentative essay score, I talked to Ms. H for make sure that, is it fix I got this score? Even the score was not so good, but its ok. Because my score is above the passing grade. So, Yey:D